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شموخ انسان 01-28-2011 01:38 AM

Be the poet and Rhyme with us~~
 



Hey Everyone …


Doing good!... Being in the mood!!


Today I got an idea …


Everyone come on lets write a poem!!


Not necessary Romance.!!...we’re not in Rome Each of us will write a line…



Make sure with what before it rhyme..








Ok and Yeah!!..



Let it be within the logic..



We don’t wanna lock like an alcoholic..





Hhhhhhhh ok enough from rhyming and let me explain more..

Each of us will enter and write a line regarding a topic.. it might be left open to how the other person understands your words… then he or she will complete your poem with another line …

But!! Make sure that it rhymes…

when I say rhyme I mean the last words of your both lines have the same sound !!

In other words.. let it flow like music.. like : http://files.shabab.ps/store/1/1101272333149smB.gif


Song.. Wrong

Right... Fight

White... light

The poem won’t exceed ten lines and then we’ll officially announce it as it is completed .. to start a new one!




So Guys!! Lets Get Started..:ShababSmile240:




Soldiers…… march.. march … march





بالعربي :ShababSmile250:
كل اللي عليكوم تعملوه بهاد الموضوع .. انكوم تدخلوا وتكتبوا سطر ..جملة لها علاقة بالجملة اللي قبلها او تكون آخر كلمة من جملتك على وزن آخر كلمة من جملة العضو اللي قبلوا مع مراعة تناسق المعني ^_^

وهيك منعمل شعر وبنكون كلنا شعراء شاركوا فيه ..وبس يوصل الشعر لعشر ابيات او عشر جمل ^^ منعلن انتهاء الشعر وبيختم بخاتمة

ومبدأ شعر جديد وبخص موضوع جديد
^^

شموخ انسان 01-28-2011 01:45 AM

رد: Be the poet and Rhyme with us~~
 
I'll start

^^

.. i tried to forget the day you left

إيقاع 01-30-2011 11:50 AM

رد: Be the poet and Rhyme with us~~
 
But You Are In My Heart ... And Don't Let Me Take A Rest


:)

شموخ انسان 01-31-2011 10:56 AM

رد: Be the poet and Rhyme with us~~
 
Becaus i Run From Every Hit

Thank you Mam

شموخ انسان 02-03-2011 07:42 PM

رد: Be the poet and Rhyme with us~~
 
يلا فش حدا بعرف انجليزي؟؟؟

عاشقة فلسطين.. 02-20-2011 05:38 PM

رد: Be the poet and Rhyme with us~~
 
Very nice topic
I will come back and read more
God bless you


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