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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ...Some Thing I Wrote... ((( Thoughts)))u


Banbon
01-17-2007, 12:36 PM
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A thousand miles between us ...but I still feel you close

I can hear your laugher voice ... I see your pretty eyes shining and I can`t forget those

And while I`m staring at your picture... I wonder:have I chosen the right one ...am I wrong or what

But I hold your letter ...and I read your words...and I realize that You Are The One

You are the person who will give me life ....you are the key of happiness and joy

... I trust you....and I hope that you deserve my trust ...

And now all I have to do is waiting for the answer....and when I get it I will know the true

.....I will know was I RIGHT or WRONG

:sh37:

هلــون
01-17-2007, 01:02 PM
Nice Topic BonBon

Thanks Alot
ღ♥ღ

صدى الصمت
01-17-2007, 08:34 PM
I can hear your laugher voice ... I see your pretty eyes shining and I can`t forget those

And while I`m staring at your picture... I wonder:have I chosen the right one ...am I wrong or what

But I hold your letter ...and I read your words...and I realize


AmAzIiIiInG

KeEp GoOoInG

^_* ThAnXxX ^_*

نونو الحلوة
01-17-2007, 09:09 PM
I trust you....and I hope that you deserve my trust


thats nice bon bon
ur topic alwayes its nice
thank u

Banbon
01-17-2007, 09:24 PM
^_^ Thanks alot ...all of you thank you for your opinions

aamin
01-18-2007, 01:43 PM
WELCOME


:s (43):


DEAR BANBON

TO YOUR HOME

THE ENGLISH FORUM

THANKS


aamin

ayman
01-21-2007, 11:32 AM
Banbon, I really like your poem. It is very beautiful in its words and language. Many people go through what is going on in the poem is about and you bring it all together perfectly. Love is truly the key to happiness and joy. And at the same time, many people do not realize that the key is trust. However, the issue is whether or not the other person feels the same way because everyone might have made some miscalculations on what the other person's feelings and that is truly heartbreaking. And all of these calculations are through a letter in which you could practically hear your counterpart's heart beat from a thousand miles away. Just as you can hear their laughter and see their eyes, I feel the beauty and love resonate in this charming poem.

Banbon
01-21-2007, 02:03 PM
WELCOME


:s (43):


DEAR BANBON

TO YOUR HOME

THE ENGLISH FORUM

THANKS


aamin

Dear aamin : thank you so much for reading my topic....hope you liked it ...





Banbon, I really like your poem. It is very beautiful in its words and language. Many people go through what is going on in the poem is about and you bring it all together perfectly. Love is truly the key to happiness and joy. And at the same time, many people do not realize that the key is trust. However, the issue is whether or not the other person feels the same way because everyone might have made some miscalculations on what the other person's feelings and that is truly heartbreaking. And all of these calculations are through a letter in which you could practically hear your counterpart's heart beat from a thousand miles away. Just as you can hear their laughter and see their eyes, I feel the beauty and love resonate in this charming poem.

Dear Ayman :
If I said a hundred (Thank You) it would`nt be enough..... I realy appreciate your opinion .. I hope to see your words in my topics always.....

king_of_love
01-21-2007, 08:14 PM
كلام رائع بيحرك شي جوا الواحد وشي جميل جداً وحلو ...

إنتي بنبون دايما ً قلمك كاتب حلو وجميل وكلو إحساس ماشاء الله عليكي ...

................................... ................................... ........:icon26: :s (43):

Banbon
01-21-2007, 08:18 PM
شكراً لردك ... ...

^_^ و تصبح على خير ...

king_of_love
01-21-2007, 08:25 PM
عفوا ً ^_^ .....

وإنتي كمان تصبحي على كل الخير يا بنبون ...

بس إحنا عنا هون لسا دري قبلكم بساعتين ...
والدنيا شكلها رح تتلج أوكي يلا باااااااااااااااااااي


ديري بالك على حالك :s (43):

نـــــديم
01-21-2007, 08:36 PM
Thank You Banbon..... And Keep Going

ريما الفلسطينيه
01-22-2007, 11:28 AM
عفوا ً ^_^ .....

وإنتي كمان تصبحي على كل الخير يا بنبون ...

بس إحنا عنا هون لسا دري قبلكم بساعتين ...
والدنيا شكلها رح تتلج أوكي يلا باااااااااااااااااااي


ديري بالك على حالك :s (43):


!!!!!!!!!!

لو انا مشرفه هالقسم كان حذفتلك مشاركتك ...

بس الله نجاك ...

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