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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A diary of a teenager


صدى الصمت
07-15-2006, 12:19 PM
Being a teen is taking a great part of my life , I'm really happy with my teenager but when I have A hard time I really heat it , I want you to read my poem and I want you honest opinion


Every thing seem to be so hard
I feel my heart is thinner than a card

Sometimes I prefer to die …
And sometimes I just want to cry

Sometimes I feel like my head will explode …
And sometimes I just feel cold

Sometimes I feel like I'm in a bad dream …
And some times I just want to scream

Some one please tell me what's wrong with me ?
Why I feel like there is a hole in me ?

I want some one just to hold me !!
Please any one just understand me !!

I want someone to heal me …
And I want someone to understand me

I really wish that all the sadness will go away …
And I just want to survive this day

Someone please tell me why I feel like this ?
Is this a stage of my life?
Or I will always feel like this ?



With all my love and respect …

Banbon
07-15-2006, 02:09 PM
very very very nice......I felt as if I have written these words....
thank u a lot

aamin
07-15-2006, 02:24 PM
:s (43): :s (43): :s (43):

GREAT MY DEAR

ECHO OF SILENCE

it,s anice expression

of your teen age

but don,t be sad

be happy as this is your

golden time of life

WELCOME


W R

aamin

صدى الصمت
07-15-2006, 02:37 PM
thanx 3almrooor ya 7elweeeeen

عاشقة فلسطين
07-15-2006, 08:53 PM
thanx fery

صدى الصمت
08-02-2006, 02:39 AM
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Troubled_Eyes
08-04-2006, 05:18 PM
wow! this poem is really touchy and sweet

did you really write this poem?

btw being a teenager is a start for misery
well maybe not for alot of people but it is to me

everything seems hard in this life - coz its the way how it goes
its as hard as a baby who just learned how to stand on his toes

sometimes things can go very wrong and you want to die
but all you can do is sit alone or with someone around and cry

sometimes you cant take it no more and you just stay cold
you would explode soon if you dont find your way through the teen road

and sometimes all you can do is scream
hopping its just a nightmare - its just a dream

youve got alot of questions
but you have no answers

all you want is to be held by someone who you trust the most
and dont worry coz you know you will be alright with nothing to cost

this is just a stage of life - people go through
just hold on and fight - its all you need to do


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this is my reply by my own style lol

thanx

كنوز
08-04-2006, 05:39 PM
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صدى الصمت
08-04-2006, 09:33 PM
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نونو الحلوة
08-06-2006, 10:06 PM
Thanks sada
its really nice

صدى الصمت
08-06-2006, 10:49 PM
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